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Five Minute Friday: SMALL


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 he didn’t expect a Valentine’s card.

She didn’t buy one either. Why?  It all seemed hopeless.  What words would make sense when it’s all about love and mushiness. There was no mushiness.  Only silence, small talk, and big, hurtful words.

But small kids have big hopes. “What are you getting mommy, daddy?  Are you getting flowers? Mommy likes chocolate. What card are you getting mommy?”  The questions did not stop.  “When are we going to the store Daddy?  Can we help? ”   

How does a man pick out a card for his wife when his heart his hurting too and it’s no small thing that life and marriage can be confusing.  How does he pick out a card with all the other men standing at card stand. Do any ache as he? Do any wish this day did not exist? How does he pick one out with his small kids looking up at him with big anticipation?  

A whispered small prayer to find the perfect one, and he picks up the card.  Front cover reads, “For my wife“.  Inside reads, “I love you.  Happy Valentine’s Day.”  Simple, small, perfect.  And the kids are happy.  What about his wife?  He finds a simple red rose and her favorite candy bar. It’s all small.  But, small sometimes brings big healing too.  

He wakes her up Valentine’s morning. She may have wanted to sleep the day away . . . pretend too, it  didn’t exist.  He gives her the rose and encourages her to get up and see the kids who have their own homemade Valentine cards. She shrugs off the rose. He had to get her something. They hug their mommy, give her kisses and mommy’s big praises over their cards melts their small, growing yet fragile hearts.  

And he gives her the card.  She reads the simple, small, easy-to-read words, and begins to sob. Small hope. 

Didn’t Jesus say, . . .  if you had faith even as small as a mustard seed, you could say to this mountain, ‘Move from here to there,’ and it would move. Nothing would be impossible.” 

 Small faith. Small beginnings.

. . . Finish

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All on the same prompt posted here at 1 minute past midnight EST every Friday. And we connect on Twitter with the hashtag #FMFParty (It stands for Five Minute Friday Party).

No extreme editing; no worrying about perfect grammar,
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Unscripted. Unedited. Real.

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Beloved KEPT Child of Jesus stumbling by faith ~ Married 30 years ~ Blessed Mama of 10 beside me & 2 at Jesus' feet ~ "Retired" homeschool mama of 22 years ~ Writer * Blogger * Reviewer ~

4 thoughts on “Five Minute Friday: SMALL

  1. Oh, Loni,
    what power in those small words…this is beautiful…thank you for giving us a small peek….praying all those small loving acts grow and bloom into something even more beautiful …blessings.

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